I love this! You must be very plaesed with the result. The masthead is vibrant, bold and modern, with the school name strategically placed and the colours well balanced. The choice of cover person is excellent, with a dynamic pose suggesting a real student at work. I would re-position the inset pic which overlaps with the cover model's left hand, though, and consider putting the coverline about the Surrey Film Competition above the inset photo. Spell check (competition). How could you make the lower coverline more legible? What other cover lines could you include, to avoid the impression that this school only has film & photography students? Grade A.
I love this! You must be very plaesed with the result. The masthead is vibrant, bold and modern, with the school name strategically placed and the colours well balanced. The choice of cover person is excellent, with a dynamic pose suggesting a real student at work. I would re-position the inset pic which overlaps with the cover model's left hand, though, and consider putting the coverline about the Surrey Film Competition above the inset photo. Spell check (competition). How could you make the lower coverline more legible? What other cover lines could you include, to avoid the impression that this school only has film & photography students? Grade A.
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